Wednesday, May 11, 2016

Robert Verdon, #139, Black Mountain Rag


need a larder
full of mountain walks
and pardalotes

fingertips of rain on the grey nurse gale
that flails the impossible slope
as the path becomes Jacob’s ladder

make mine mustard sky behind
homemade ricotta and I’ll be
happy as a peep-wren on a twig

 
 
 

2 comments:

  1. Just beautiful. First verse and 'grey nurse gale' and all of it. I was taken myself with the term 'peep-wren' (hadn't heard before) when I read up on pardalotes - love how you have used it here.

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    1. Ta, Lizz. Kate and I saw what we thought was a pardalote on Black Mountain. Wrote this this morning, did have an inadvisable verse about Gungahlin in it but thankfully I axed it!

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