Wonderfully tense. Like a spring.
thanks Rob, maybe the ending isn't the best?
Love the tumble of colour and detail - and the identififed and unidentified.
This is wonderful. Evokes my walks, too. But yes, the very last line scuttles away, Robbie:) Maybe just end with "here it comes/ but once again," in order to keep the tension alive? Dunno.
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